Hook:

Permission To Help You Hook: Your asking for her attention your not grabbing it

This hook should sound like you care about helping her and its a “We” thing.

We gotta make sure she answers in a manner like “sure man i would like to hear that”

Make sure you call out your avatar here

My heart feeling like it was about to burst when I had high BP was the worst thing ever. Let me share with you my findings on why this happens

Uncompleted Story Hook: Here, you open up as if you are going to say a sick story, but you don't finish it off.

You'll never guess what happened to me when I bumped into my ex-wife yesterday

When I found out why my heart races randomly, I was pissed that no one told me this info sooner.

Lead: Share Vulnerable Moment + Curiosity Loop

Make sure this deepens the hook so whatever you say here make sure the lead aligns with the hook go more deeper by giving a moment

Here you will share a vulnerable experience something you wont admit out loud this is to make them be like “yo wtf this mofo knows me i do the same shit and i aint told anyone about this” and then you leave it with a curiosity loop to suggest that now shits changed so they keep watching. This will earn the rights for you to take the piss about there struggles coz u kno what they going thru. If a stranger did this shit they will be angry u earn the right coz u been thru what they been thru.

AGITATION

Beat 1: Replay Moment of Frustration

Replay a moment that showed some sort of annoyance or sadness about the problem they have and show what that shit cost you. Dont say whats annoying or sad show the example like say “i still remember the day when i woke up and looked inside my dads bedroom and he was gone without telling us, i didnt leave my house for weeks i lost my friendships with people ”

You see that's some sad shit. I did just say are you upset your dad left you

I replayed the moment that made you sad + i made it clear what that cost me

Beat 2: Failed Attempts

Name two to three failed solutions and go deep on what it cost them. I tried finasteride, and that killed my libido. It had my wife asking, "Do I still love her?"

Beat 3: Replay Moment Of Shame

Find something shameful that will make them feel like absolute dog shit, because this is what's going to make them want to change. For example, I've become a bad mother to my kids. “

Dont state what it is just replay moments of her doing this like “i snapped at my kids for no reason and they didn't speak to me”

Beat 4: Replay moment showing that no one actually understands this

Find a real-life moment where she was basically dismissed about this problem. Remember, you have to be able to film it via camera. A lot of these people feel isolated, like they're all alone with this problem. That's why we need to do this.
And you're going to become that person who understands it.

EDUCATION (UMP)

Step 1: Shift the blame

  • What: it was never her fault, she was missing information.
  • Cam: she opens by saying nobody told her this for over a decade. She wasn’t wrong, she’d just been given the wrong information.
  • Why: it lifts the shame from the agitation, relief starts, and it opens a gap: told you what?
  • Toothache: “For years, nobody told me why my tooth kept hurting.”

Step 2: Name what she tried

  • What: her real fixes, and the fact that they only worked on the surface.
  • Cam: every time she shaved, waxed or lasered, she was only removing the hair, not dealing with why her body kept making it. He says it’s specific to what she’s already tried, so it lands.
  • Why: she recognises her own fixes, and it plants the idea that they were aimed at the wrong thing.
  • Toothache: “Every painkiller and numbing gel only quietened the pain. None of it touched why it kept coming back.”

Step 3: Give the missing information (the real cause)

  • What: the hidden reason she’s stuck, in simple words.
  • Cam: there’s a hormone signal telling her body to keep making thicker, darker hair. He says it reframes the problem with new information, and she’ll now ask “okay, but how do I fix this?”
  • Rules (his mechanism checklist): simple, explainable in 10–15 seconds, doesn’t sound like marketing, and explains why everything else failed.
  • Toothache: “There’s a tiny crack letting the cold reach the nerve.”

Step 4: Knock out each failed fix

  • What: line up each fix against the real cause and show that none of them could touch it.
  • Cam: shaving cuts it, waxing pulls it, laser burns it: “But the signal? Still running.” That’s why it always grew back. He says this lines up every past fix against the new understanding and takes the blame off her again.
  • Toothache: “Painkillers dull it. Gel numbs it. Chewing on the other side avoids it. But the crack? Still open. That’s why it always came back.”

SOLUTION INTRO (UMS)

Step 5: The ingredient, no brand name

  • What: name what fixes it, not who sells it.
  • Cam: the only thing that finally changed it was an oil from a plant extract. He points out he doesn’t name the brand or say where to buy it: “ingredient first not product”.
  • Why: it still feels like a story, not an ad, so her guard stays down.
  • Toothache: “What finally changed it was a mineral that rebuilds the tooth’s outer layer.”

Step 6: How it fixes the real cause

  • What: in simple words, how it deals with the cause from Half 1.
  • Cam: it doesn’t remove the hair, it slows the signal. He says everything before this explained why she’s stuck, and this is the first time she hears how to fix it. It’s exactly what she wants to hear.
  • Rule: keep it to 10–15 seconds.
  • Toothache: “It doesn’t numb the pain, it fills the crack so the cold can’t reach the nerve.”

Step 7: Proof, ideally against the fix that failed her

  • What: a real study or result, and best of all, one that beats a fix from your Beat 2.
  • Cam: tested head-to-head against laser, and it won. Laser was the $1,200 fix that failed her in the agitation, so hearing it lose “flips the power dynamic”.
  • Our rule: only claim what the study actually found.
  • Toothache: “It was tested against the leading numbing gel and did better.” (Only if a real study says so.)

Step 8: Not all versions are the same

  • What: warn her that most versions out there won’t work.
  • Cam: most bottles on Amazon are watered down. He says this moves her from “I need this” to “I need the right version”, and it leaves her no reason to buy it anywhere else (1:15:18).
  • Toothache: “But most toothpastes with it barely have any in them.”

Step 9: Why this version works

  • What: the reason behind step 8, so it isn’t just a claim.
  • Cam: it uses a special oil base that carries the active part down to where the problem is. He says he’s backing himself up with an explanation, not just making a claim.
  • Toothache: “This one’s a gel that stays on the tooth long enough to sink in.”

Step 10: The brand, through an authority

  • What: the brand name finally appears, recommended by someone credible.
  • Cam: his dermatologist recommended that brand specifically. He says that adds validation.
  • Our rule: a real person who actually recommended it.
  • Toothache: “My dentist told me to get Brand X specifically.”

RESULTS: DID IT ACTUALLY WORK? (CLOSING LOOP TIME)

Step 1: Show the second she noticed it was working

  • What it means: don’t say it worked. Show the tiny moment she noticed, using something she touched, saw or felt.
  • Test: could a camera film that exact second?
  • ❌“My teeth got better.” That’s a claim, nothing to see.
  • ✅“I drank ice water without thinking, and nothing hurt.” You can see her drink and you can see her surprise.
  • Cam’s: she ran her hand over her chin and it felt different.

Step 2: Show how her day changed, with times

  • What it means: pick something she had to do every day because of the problem, then show how much less she has to do it now. Add when: week 1, month 2.
  • Keep it small and believable: “much less”, not “gone forever”.
  • Test: does it have a time? Is it something from her daily life?
  • ❌“Now my pain is gone forever.”
  • ✅“By week 3 I’d stopped carrying the numbing gel in my bag.”
  • Cam’s: by month 2, she went from plucking every morning to once or twice a week.

Step 3: Call back the pains from the agitation, now gone

  • What it means: go back to the exact moments from your beats and show each one is okay now. Do it two ways:
    • One big callback: the same moment or object from the start, now feeling good.
    • A quick “no more…” list: several pains, each one gone.
  • Test: does every callback match a pain you showed earlier? If it links to nothing, it’s just a claim.
  • ✅One big callback: the hook was the ice cream twinge. Now she orders ice cream with her kids without thinking.
  • ✅“No more” list: no more chewing on one side, no more gel in my bag, no more saying no to ice cream.
  • Cam’s doc: the mirror. At the start she plucked in front of it at dawn. At the end, she looks in it and doesn’t look away.
  • Cam’s full ad: no more early alarm, no more tweezers in every bag, no more dreading bright lights. She stops flinching when someone gets close to her face, which is his Beat 3 shame.

CLOSE

Step 1: Social proof, show lots of women already use it

  • What it means: she’s not the first to try it. Lots of women like her already have.
  • Test: is the number real? Does it describe women like her?
  • ✅“Over 10,000 people have already stopped carrying numbing gel.”
  • Cam’s: over 55,000 women have already given up daily plucking for it.

Step 2: Compare the price to the fix that failed her

  • What it means: make it look cheap next to what she keeps wasting money on. Use a fix from your Beat 2.
  • Test: is the comparison a fix she actually tried in your agitation?
  • ✅“Why keep buying painkillers every month, when this costs less than one box?”
  • Cam’s: why keep spending hundreds a year on methods that only remove the hair, when this costs less than one waxing appointment?

Step 3: Tell her what to do, plus what she gets

  • What it means: the click, with a soft nudge and her dream outcome in the same line.
  • Test: does it say what to tap? Is there a gentle reason to act now? Does it name what she really wants?
  • ✅“Tap below to check if it’s still available, and finally eat what you want again.”
  • Cam’s: click the link to see if it’s still in stock, and finally stop planning your life around your facial hair.

Step 4: The guarantee, which removes the risk

  • What it means: if it doesn’t work, she gets her money back.
  • Test: is the guarantee real, with the number of days?
  • ✅“Every order comes with a 60-day money-back guarantee.”
  • Cam’s: 60-day money-back guarantee, so she has nothing to lose and everything to gain.